Fusion

A satanic revolution/

 Demonic illusions/

 Popping bottles of deluded, an educed delusion in which/

Theirs a need to burn crucifix's/

 Tying nooses to necks for the next person to speak up and step in for the Constitution which/

 Has been thoroughly diluted, with water polluted by hate crimes that alluded prosecution/ 

Blurred the lines of black an white/

Caused confusion an interracial prostitution/

 Ironically resulting in the solution/

 //A new color of grey after the fusion//  

Reviews

[Some Kind of Poet]

This is good. I agree with AaronFreitas, it's creative. Perhaps a proofread, however, as there are a few grammar mistakes and a few words written incorrect. 'Tying nooses to necks for the next person to speak up and step in for the constitution which has been thoroughly diluted with water polluted by hate crimes...' < I love that part... it is so true and resembles society a lot. Keep up with the work!

[costa siwale]

my reviews may be coming in late, but by god! am enjoying your work, en i'll keeping reading

[Emily]

Very nice poem!
Keep it up!!

[dan]

Persecution based on race and religion is the mark of a coward. Hiding behind ideology to shield one's stupidity from being exposed is one of the lowest forms of human behavior out there. Different religions, so let's fight a war? C'mon! Thanks for shedding light on this topic. take care...dan

[dead scribe]

Good s**t man, I got something, just not for posting

[Valkyrie Warrior]

I love it, very creative and powerful!

[Johnny]

Your poems are very reminiscient of.. however I am not understanding the forward slashes.. the words on though I do kapish their intended meaning or so I believe that I do.. great job!

[BLitZeD]

thanks man, and the slashes are simply because i feel some type of way about putting periods, just because its the end of the sentence doesn't always mean its the end of the sentence.

[zaisham9393]

Nice work :))Thanks for sharing :))!

[BLitZeD]

TY ; )

[zaisham9393]

YW :DDDDDDDD

[zaisham9393]

Nice work :))Thanks for sharing :))!

[Dead]

This is really good!! :)

[Insight "MH"]

The last line is an epic end, so lovely, well done!

Insight.