Cool it!

Cool it, a break

A big mistake

A test, a mess

A great big cake.

A lake, a bed

A pain in my head

Cool it you fool!

Give me space

Come here my dear

And rest your head

On my chest.

 

Think from afar play the radio in the car

I don’t want to see you

Where are you?

Why aren’t you here?

 

You make me mad

You are infuriating

You are testing, testing

You try my love, my patience

And like magnets on

Opposing poles

You move away as I approach

With a dart of a glance

And acid reproach

You pain me

You drain me

You abstain me

And why?

 

Because your fence can be climbed

I’ve looked over the top

I’ve counted the sheep

Your little secrets

A surprise on the turn

My fingers burn

Your fence is electrified!

Reviews

ah, sometimes we just can't make up our bloody minds.

"leave me alone, I'm lonely".

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

yay, I love this one..I liked the rest , but this one.. it is love..

[Brianna Brie]

You make me mad
You are infuriating
You are testing, testing
You try my love, my patience
And like magnets on
Opposing poles
You move away as I approach
With a dart of a glance
And acid reproach
You pain me
You drain me
You abstain me
And why?

Because your fence can be climbed
I've looked over the top
I've counted the sheep
Your little secrets
A surprise on the turn
My fingers burn
Your fence is electrified!

I love the last two verses. Can really feel this on and even relate to it. It is unique with the images you have painted. Splendid write! Left with a mischievous feeling.

[Just Manoosh]

Honey this is brilliant, the words dance ....... I especially love the end. Mx