Turtles

Turtles

A Poem by blindseeker
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Turtles

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Turtles are great
Their house is on their back
Praise our lord turtles

© 2013 blindseeker


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blindseeker
I like turtles.

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Not bad, but if you were going for haiku, this is 4-6-5, which is definitely not the traditional format. Not to say that you have to follow that format, but it looks like you tried to, so just a heads up there. I do like your topic here, though, and you've done a good job with it no matter what format you were going for.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Not bad, but if you were going for haiku, this is 4-6-5, which is definitely not the traditional format. Not to say that you have to follow that format, but it looks like you tried to, so just a heads up there. I do like your topic here, though, and you've done a good job with it no matter what format you were going for.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Turtles are great. Enough said.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

blindseeker

12 Years Ago

I know right? I need to further express my feelings towards turtles.
Elizabeth Marie O'neil-Smith

12 Years Ago

There is no thought more profound then that of the wondering of turtles.

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Added on February 22, 2013
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