Edging true risk

Inspired by a man I saw walking on the road-edge of a long spacious sidewalk.

2    He walked

3    on the edge

4    out of the way

4    so close to harm

4    as if to show

3    that in his

4    humility

3    therein lie

2    his risk

2    his life

Reviews

[Rochelle Tyler]

I'm curious about the numbers. Syllables: I get that much lol. Anyways, I admire your observance of such little, every day things. Whatever your reasoning behind the structure of this poem, I enjoy it.