wow.
wow...
wow! this explains me and my siblings to a T! We are ALWAYS over-analyzing our relationships. We really do become "our own lost strangers" sometimes... not even knowing what we ourselves want, yet expecting others to have a plan of their own. In the end though, it always comes back to the obvious yearning, "When all we really want is that thread that binds, The Strength that joins, And breaks down, All these man-made walls, And, That connection that bonds.."
So beautiful.
Couldn't have said it better!
Posted 12 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Oh wow! Thanks for such amazing kind words!! I'm glad you were able to find some sorta connection wi.. read moreOh wow! Thanks for such amazing kind words!! I'm glad you were able to find some sorta connection with 'Connection' :), it makes the writer in me do a happy dance. The feedback/review is truly, greatly and sincerely appreciated!!!!
11 Years Ago
You're so welcome! I get just as excited when people review and comment on my own writing too, so I .. read moreYou're so welcome! I get just as excited when people review and comment on my own writing too, so I totally understand :)
wow.
wow...
wow! this explains me and my siblings to a T! We are ALWAYS over-analyzing our relationships. We really do become "our own lost strangers" sometimes... not even knowing what we ourselves want, yet expecting others to have a plan of their own. In the end though, it always comes back to the obvious yearning, "When all we really want is that thread that binds, The Strength that joins, And breaks down, All these man-made walls, And, That connection that bonds.."
So beautiful.
Couldn't have said it better!
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Oh wow! Thanks for such amazing kind words!! I'm glad you were able to find some sorta connection wi.. read moreOh wow! Thanks for such amazing kind words!! I'm glad you were able to find some sorta connection with 'Connection' :), it makes the writer in me do a happy dance. The feedback/review is truly, greatly and sincerely appreciated!!!!
11 Years Ago
You're so welcome! I get just as excited when people review and comment on my own writing too, so I .. read moreYou're so welcome! I get just as excited when people review and comment on my own writing too, so I totally understand :)
I found it rather beautiful, with a great ending to the poem.
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
Thanks a bunch for stopping by and taking time out to review, it's truly and greatly appreciated! I'.. read moreThanks a bunch for stopping by and taking time out to review, it's truly and greatly appreciated! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Its a good poem. It sort of reads as a rant, like a lover talking desperately to another, which adds to the effect. Good job. It is an inspired poem.
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
Thank you so very much for stopping by, as well as, for the kind words and feedback, it's greatly ap.. read moreThank you so very much for stopping by, as well as, for the kind words and feedback, it's greatly appreciated!