Follower

Follower

A Poem by Moth Phoenix
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yeah....

"

Why is it that I'm a follower?

Why do I get yelled at?

Does everyone hate me?

I can never do anything right.

No one is pleased with me. 

Why can't I just go away?

Vanish….

disappear… 

I'm almost invisible…

no one cares….

Why can't I be me?

Life just isn't fair…

Utopia why aren't you coming?

Don't yell at me…

stop your shouting. 

Take your hands off of me and let me go. 

Why can't I be strong?

Why cant I have thicker skin?

I love everyone.

Please don't make me do it.

I can't hold back.

Say you're sorry and care.

Look my way instead of the other. 

© 2011 Moth Phoenix


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Story of my life. Though you put it in to words better than I could have.

Posted 13 Years Ago


i like this in a poetic way its raw and has much emotion and flow i belive its one of your best
i feel sorry that you feel this way though

Posted 13 Years Ago


this poem is very relatable. there doesn't seem to be much of a structured flow but i think that works. it kind of seems like a stream of consiousness in a good way. also i like how "vanish" and "disappear" have their own line. and i like ur opening line
:D

Posted 13 Years Ago



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A Poem by Moth Phoenix