To A Friend

I miss a good friend and I have for a while... this is for him. :)

Please make this pain go away,

you're too far.

Help me get through to you,

only cause I care. 

I hope you're doing well,

I know I'm not. 

Please come back to me soon,

life isn't the same. 

I need to hear your voice,

just to make sure you're okay. 

I cry I look up and I sigh,

I sigh I look down and I cry. 

Please make this pain go away,

I'm too far from you. 

The air is cold without here,

my heart still holds a place. 

I miss you...

Please make this pain go away,

because I can't last another day. 

Author's Note

I haven't written in a while, but what do you think?

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

"To A Friend" + singer + Acoustic guitar = HIT!
I love the simplicity of this poem. Very clean
and sweet.

[Adam :P]

good ring to them. good write.

[Frank F. Atanacio]

its a very good write; The lines have a certain ring to them:

I cry I look up and I sigh,

I sigh I look down and I cry.