Beautiful

=] all I have to say is, =]

There can't be any words to truly describe,

you make me feel beautiful. 

I know he doesn't even have to try,

it comes to naturally. 

Be without make up or wearing pretty clothes,

he makes me feel beautiful. 

I'll rest peacefully in his arms and breathe,

as his hands caress my cheek. 

He tells me how much he doesn't deserve me,

I'll tell him he does. 

Short skirts and skanky tank tops are a no,

sweats and big sweatshirts are a yes. 

I can't help but always smile when he says he likes it,

he makes me feel beautiful.

I can't wait till the next time we talk,

or the next time we hug. 

Time seems to whiz by when that happens,

why can't it just stand still? 

Ugly and horrible looking,

not the good morning look. 

He'll kiss my lips and whisper softly,

'you look beautiful' 

Author's Note

If a guy tells you, you look pretty in sweat pants and a big baggy sweatshirt, he's a keeper :-)

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I thought the point of this poem was to highlight [his] ability
to look at [her] and only see the person within. The walks and
conversations are really special things because it is bonding on
a very personal level. Sure bungee jumping and skydiving is fun,
but you cut straight to the point here and search for evidence
of admiration on level that cant be faked.

I think you offer good advice about not allowing the materialistic
world to bastardize the confines of genuine feelings. I saw a lesson
here that says you shouldnt have to bend over backwards to please
a person who says they care for you. Nice!

[Nicholas]

I would like to clarify a few points before I take a look at the poem:
1) It isn't a quality of "him" that makes him able to make you feel beautiful, unless its the quality of his that enables him to see it... you provide the rest :)
2) you are beautiful, regardless of what you wear... lol... at Cotillian or on the windowsill... any real guy will see that...

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

When a man truly loves a woman all he should see is beauty cause it is the inner beauty that makes the outer shine.

[Alicia Schroeder]

What an awesome write..

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This poem was fantastic!