Fallin' for You

HA! Found this from freshman year :P

Goosebumps, chills and a smile

She's wondering what is happening

She gets a fluttery little buzz

She now knows that she is in love.

She's wondering what is happening,

Sweaty palms and a flushed face. 

She knows now that she is in love.

If only he love knew that she felt this way. 

Sweaty palms and a flushed face.

Goosebumps chills and a smile.

If only her love knew she felt this way.

She gets a fluttery little buzz.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[rielovella]

How cute is this poem. If a girl likes someone, she'll feel these. Anyways, good job!

[Looouise]

If only he love knew - her

That's a very simple cute poem. :] I like how you use the characteristics to show that she is in love, sweaty palms, and the fluttering feeling inside her stomach. :] I also like how you repeat, "goosebumps, chills and a smile." It reinforces the idea.