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yeah...

Why do they like her more?

I guess I'm just too shy.

I smile more than she does,

some reason they like her more.

She doesn't even talk a lot,

but they talk to her.

I try to not let it get to me,

but all it does is hurt.

I'm the one with the big smile,

they speak more to her.

I guess I can't help but be a bit jealous,

I usually don't get like that. 

It doesn't make me feel pretty,

is it because she wears heels and skirts? 

All I wear are skinny jeans and converse.

Why do they choose her over me?

I can tell they like her more. 

I can't help but feel a little hurt,

should I stop?

Maybe.

But why do they like her more? 

Author's Note

I went to the mall with my friend and I see how some of the guys like to talk to her more than me, and I'm not looking for a boyfriend, but it just hurts how they pay so much more attention to her than me. I thought i'd get over it more if I made a poem, so thoughts??? Criticism?

Reviews

[Brittni]

I know how you feel in this poem. It makes you doubt your confidence when you wonder why they pick the other over you. It plays with your mind, makes you doubt yourself, and makes you wonder what's wrong with yourself. I have been in that situation myself many times(and currently in it again.) and this is exactly how I feel. Very well written and beautifully expressed.

[Ashley]

awww its ok hunny!! i understand what you mean though. you are pretty just the way you are. i like the writing though.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Awe feel better...
guys are dumb like that.
You have a good man in your life just pay attention to him.