Night

Night

A Poem by Moth Phoenix
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Not sure it just sounded really good :D

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An evanescence sun has come upon,

oh how I am lost without you.

we have to wait the hours until dawn,

lost in a midnight blue. 

The eyes of the sky twinkle so bright,

offering us a speck of hope.

Let us wander the night floor in delight,

and find shelter to wait for the morning light.

© 2010 Moth Phoenix


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Moth Phoenix
Let me know what you think :D

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This was really good. I agree that it was sweet and simple. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I felt like I was a mole....s**t...I'm really high lol, Despite the shortness I was immersed into the peom, very well written

Posted 14 Years Ago


Simple and short, beautiful job!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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