When I'm With You

When I'm With You

A Poem by Moth Phoenix
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When I'm with you

nothing can go wrong.

Although it's not physical,

it's meaningful.


To hear your voice over the phone,

just to say goodbye or i love you.

I couldn't ask for anything better,

you truly are perfect. 


From the deepest part of my heart,

to the center of my soul.

I can feel the deep connection,

that connects me to you. 

Nothing I've ever know could be so strong,

to withstand this beautiful song. 


When we're apart,

it's darkness. 

The light is dimer,

and my hear beats slower. 


I can't help but just giggle,

you're the one that causes it all.

I just don't know,

our souls and hearts connect.

I make every second we're together count,

for I hate to miss you. 


I listen to what my heart says,

and I know it's right. 

My heart speaks the words I long for,

and I know he accepts them. 


When I'm with you,

nothing can go wrong.

Although it's not physical,

it's emotional. 

© 2010 Moth Phoenix


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Yay! Love the Spiritual connection with your partner described so perfectly here. Great work.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Beautiful

Posted 14 Years Ago


sincere and sweet..
good write..
thanks for sharing..

Posted 14 Years Ago



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