Smile

I hope it makes [[YOU]] smile!!!!

Smile for me please,

don't be sad.

Come on say cheese,

don't get mad. 

Why must you give me a frown,

you know I love you.

Turn it upside down,

I smile at what you do.

Please don't feel upset,

I don't like it.

I'm here to talk to so don't fret,

when I can't talk to you I throw a fit.

I wait for your message every day,

I want to know what you have to say!!

Reviews

[J]

This is great :] KEEP IT UP!

[WriterMe]

Oh this made *ME* smile =D Haha very cute write. I seem to be using that word a lot while reviewing your poems =P Great job =]

[Angel Veselinov]

Great Read really liked it thanks for cheering me up :) Nice flow and rhyming

[The Wave]

Cute.
Wish there was that little something more... the IT factor!
A suggestion though would be to improve your diction.

Overall, The flow is consistent. And its well-expressed,
Good job.

[YosepH]

Fine, I'll cheer up... Thank you hun... :)

[Paul Okeke]

what i have to say is that he loves you...and your poem smiles

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I love this!!!!!!!! :)
I can at least say my smile wasn't fake. :)