Sonnet

My first sonnet... took me a while... i hope you enjoy it!!

Deep in your emerald eyes of pure bliss,

you are everything I could want and more.

For our lips to touch and to get your kiss,

I'll lie on my bed as you close the door.

to lay in bed and feel your gentle touch,

to to feel embraced in your deep love. 

being so far from you is way too much. 

I feel you were sent from up above. 

The way the wind blows I can year your name,

to be with you forever by the sea.

Together I know we can play this game,

I lay awake and feel you hold me. 

I would do anything just to see you,

 no words can describe how much I love you. 

Reviews

[Hippy]

Beautiful i really loved it its so sweet

[zappy]

this is really good it sounds like a poem i am working on u put to 2s in line 6 over all this is a good poem