Vortex

I just wrote what came to my fingertips... meh

Forever captured,

lost in a vortex.

Why can't she escape?

She needs to figure it out.

Why?

Sometimes she laughs,

sometimes she cries. 

Where is this leading her?

Why does she want to go there?

It's all in her best interest. 

Don't question.

What?

Who?

She knows were she is going.

Sometimes she hides,

maybe you can find her. 

Go ahead she's waiting to play,

she'll take your hand and run. 

Her inner child needs the fun.

She lives with pain,

but she doesn't show it.

Underneath coy and happy,

lies the real girl. 

Who is she?

No one knows. 

Smile.

She needs to do that.

One day she'll find out who she really is,

she will remember him and smile.

And say thank you. 

For now she's forever captured,

and she can't get out.

Trapped in her confusion vortex. 

Author's Note

I guess it turned out to be a poem where this girl doesn't know who she is and one day she'll find out... you tell me what YOU think =]
I hope you enjoyed my randomness!!

Reviews

[GunMetal]

This is an interesting stream of thought. Confusion was largely portrayed as I felt the poem twist between many emotions without any warning. Well done.

[Katelin]

I like it alotttt =D I can relate to some aspects of it, good job.

[Hippy]

very interesting if i do say

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I thought this was really good. I completely enjoyed this. I can relate...I don't know how I am at the moment.... Thanks for sharing. :)

[Aurora Boreyalis]

i really like it :P its interesting