Cupid's Arrow

For someone :] Made me smile while I wrote it!! Hope it makes them smile.

I can't control myself,

when I hear your voice I'm in a hot sweat.

I feel my heart beat faster,

the more you talk the more I listen.

I feel adrenaline pulse through me,

as we sleep in a tall tall tree. 

I hear your voice echo in my mind,

the love you've given me has made me blind.

Direct hit from cupid's arrow,

pierced my heart.

Now I can feel you wherever I am,

the distance can't stop that. 

I can always close my eyes,

and see your handsome face. 

If I don't say goodnight and goodbye,

I'll lie awake in bed and cry. 

One day I'll take your hand in mine,

as we stand under the brightest sunshine.

Together and our noses will touch,

while I feel myself in your clutch. 

All it takes is those intense three words,

we'll fly together like two love birds. 

To look in your eyes,

I'd die.

To just give you a hug,

you'd keep me away from any bug.

To give you a passionate kiss,

would be complete bliss.

To just hold you in my arms,

would be the best thing ever.

Author's Note

Reviews???
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Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I thought this was cute. I thought it was amazing. I really liked it a lot. Thanks for sharing. :)

[ChristianM]

Very beautiful portrayal of being in love.
I'm a helpless romantic who is duty bound on keeping love alive and applaud your exemplary job at helping the cause. lol
Great poem.

[Hippy]

aww so cute i love it made me smile

[Antonio Valentino]

Karina, this was very sweet, and innocent, a true romantic poem. Very nicely done, thank you for sharing it with us.

Antonio :)

[Daydreamer54]

Wow! I thought this was really cute and some of it as very poetic
All it takes is those intense three words,

we'll fly together like two love birds.
Like this for example. I love it! Great poem! :)