Deserve

Just getting some thoughts out.

Sometimes I sit at school or at home and wonder.....

Do I deserve you? 

Sometimes I seem more into you than you're into me.....

But you just don't know.

I feel you're a very conserved person.....

I shouldn't let that get in the way. 

I don't always get the answer I want from you.....

That's not your fault you just don't know. 

I reread our text messages and wonder......

Do you deserve me? 

It is fair that you cause me all of this confusion.....

People say to give it time. 

I will give it time but before I need a tiny hint....

I know you have your own life.

All I need is a tiny hint boy and I'll be fine.....

You don't always respond. 

I'd walk all those miles just to sit and be with you.....

Would you do the same for me?

I constantly write poems and songs for you.....

Do you honestly deserve them all? 

I could easily give them to another guy.....

I don't want to.

Are you playing hard to get or are you not interested.....

I'd sit here and cry all night long. 

But I'd at least know your answer.....

I don't want to lose you as my friend.

No matter what will happen between us.....

I sit in a tree and stare out at the cars and highway.....

I can see me in a car driving towards your way.

As I drive I would have my music on and think......

Do we deserve each other? 

Author's Note

Reviews? Comments? Critique?

Reviews

[SarahCortland]

This is really good i love it! It's the thought that we have when we are in love or think we are. It's the questioning of ourselves in the most basic way! Truly great I love it! 100/100 all the way! :)

[Khaotic Katastrophe]

:'( well written. im feeling this way right now and it sucks. i'm sorry that you have to. i wish you well in what may come. thanks for sharing :)

[Hippy]

I'm sorry you have to feel this way and idk the answers for you i couldn't tell you what Sam thinks could you just ask him how he feels so you don't have to live with this pain in I'm sure you deserve him you are a great person but the other way around i couldn't tell you i don't know him just ask him its the only way to help sure it could hurt but its something you must learn from it will cause less pain in the end for if he doesn't then you will be hurt but you will come to understand it and you can make yourself better with the healing power of time and if he does feel this way for you then wouldn't that solve allot a your problems any which way you will have learned something and gotten a new lesson learned

[The Last Poetic King]

Again I wonder who this is about, but I think I might know. Don't let the worry get to you, because sometimes you can over think or over worry a situation which will cause problems for you. So keep your head held up high and keep writing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Life is hard. Our mind never give us peace. The question should we give or not. I like the poem. The description and the question made the poem strong and a pleasure to read. A excellent poem.
Thank you.
Coyote