Does it Seem Fair?

Does it Seem Fair?

A Poem by Moth Phoenix
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I love my best friend but sometimes i don't feel like her best friend.

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Does it seem fair?


That when we hang out you talk to him?


Does it seem fair?


That when your with him I get shut out?


Does it seem fair?


That you make me feel like crap sometimes?


Does it seem fair?


That you choose him over me?


Does it seem fair?


When I'm in need all you say is sorry?


Does it seem fair?


That I do so much more for you?


Does it seem fair?


That I'm your best friend yet I'm not treated like it? 


Girl you know I love you but it just Doesn't seem fair! 

© 2010 Moth Phoenix


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Moth Phoenix
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yep its not fair its Bros before hoes. and i like the way you repeat here i usually hate the repetition but you pull it off very nicely

Posted 14 Years Ago


This shows when girls get too obsessed with their bf's and blow everyone off, i had a friend who did that once and it sucked. great write. love the truthfulness. keep it up.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Your definently not overreacting. Even tho it probably won't be easy, you should tell her how you feel, so that way your friendship will still be good and strong. Great job on this poem, guess i shoulda put that 1st lol. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


DUDE IM IN TEARS :(

Posted 14 Years Ago


I thought this was a very interesting write, your obviously bothered about the way that your being treated so why dont you talk to her? Just a thought.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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