Blind?

For anyone who has a crush and has told them how they feel but they aren't sure how their crush feels.

She poured her heart out to you,

all you do is stare.

She told you everything she had,

you run your fingers through her hair
.
She told you she thought other girls were better,

a tear fall from her eyes.

You know that's not the truth,

but you can't let her know what's under your disguise.

You open your mouth to say something,

she looks down at her feet.

Nothing escapes your pink lips,

but you put your hand to her cheek.

She isn't sure what you feel deep down,

maybe she should leave.

Just go ahead and be truthful dude,

say anything and for sure she'll believe.

All she wants is for you to like her back,

Are you too blind to see?

That maybe you two were meant to be.

Author's Note

Any grammar mistakes please ignore, although i checked over it. Tell me what you think =]
and....ENJOY!!!

Reviews

[Dom]

Great poem! Ur an awesome writer and i heart ur creativeness lol. Great job!:)

[Elaine]

This is a very cute poem.

[Luna Northstar]

I love this piece, so beautiful.

[Hippy]

i really like this peice here it was so sad and magical at the same time is this wat happened with you and that one guy you been talking to

[Alex Zynder]

good structure, try doing the same kind of poem without any rhyming or sentence structure. just write it how you think it, and you ll think of some more good stuff.

[Antonio Valentino]

Karina, this was beautiful! I'm glad I got to read it tonight!

Keep up the wonderful writing!
Antonio

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Let me guess about who this is about. It was a good read. I enjoyed it because it. Good sentence structure. I loved it.