I Miss You

I Miss You

A Poem by Moth Phoenix
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Ever have that great friend who you just seemed to drift away from? well I've been through that and I still miss him, I see him every day.

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I can't take it anymore, 
I hate admitting it out loud. 
I still miss you,
but do you miss me? 
Every time I hear that song I cry,
you're on my mind every day. 
How come we can't rekindle our friendship?
What went wrong between us. 
You could always make me laugh,
no matter what kind of day it was. 
I want to feel that way again,
but I'm afraid I won't. 
It's been two years since you gave me that last look,
and it's one I'll never forget. 
The times of staring at each other and laughing,
now I'm sitting here crying. 
I wish I was brave enough to give this to you,
but I don't have the strength. 
You look through me as if nothing ever happened,
are you hiding your sadness deep down? 
There's only one thing I can tell you,
and that is I miss you. 

© 2010 Moth Phoenix


Author's Note

Moth Phoenix
Dedicated to Ryan... I still miss you.

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Awww so cute. I read Ryan too and I liked it. :)))

Posted 14 Years Ago


well..this pokes at some old wounds with a pretty green stick cut fresh from a tree in a pretty spring one day in the rain....

i mean

i miss some people too

Posted 14 Years Ago


Have you stopped for a second and considered that maybe he misses you too?

And any poetry written from the heart is good poetry.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I think it's great, you really cared about Ryan. I hate when guys find girls who care about them and they don't even give a s**t. It sucksssss grrrrrrrrr

Great poem though.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Great poem. I totally agree with Hippy. U should talk to him. He probably wants to talk, but myabe hes afraid or sumtin.

Posted 14 Years Ago


its good man maby you should talk to him he probly to stubrned to talk to you or scard to hear what you think or scared you are upset at him

Posted 14 Years Ago



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