Name in the Sand

The ocean waves come in and out,

the memories of you fade. 

I write your name in the sand,

I know your lying like I know the back of my hand. 

There's nothing more you could say,

so don't try to lie another day. 

I wrote your name in the sand today,

I watched it fade away. 

Damn I never want to see you again,

I thought you were my boyfriend. 

Tomorrow is another day,

maybe I'll find someone new. 

I need someone who cares about me,

and loves me more than you did. 

I thought you were true not a cheater,

when you left I always knew you went to meet her. 

I wrote your name in the sand today,

I watched it fade away. 

Damn i never want to see you again,

I thought you were my boyfriend. 

I can't take your lying anymore,

I want you to walk out that door. 

Go on and leave me alone,

look I stomped on your f*cking phone. 

I always thought we were meant for each other,

but I can see I was wrong. 

I wrote your name in the sand the other day,

ha what did you say? 

Damn I never want to see you again, 

I hope you take what you said to me to your final end. 

I wrote your name in the sand today, 

and I watched our memories fade away. 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Jeff Miller]

I'm so sorry for the horrible event that caused you to write such an amazing piece. But, at least, you were able to turn it into such a wonderful piece! Keep up the good work!

[alyssa]

This is a true and sad peom. We think a guy is for us and we'll never let him go, but it just dosent seem to work that way...most just find a way to hurt us. This is a poem that so many can relate to.
Thanks for sharing such a great write!
alyssa

[Hippy]

i loved this its so sad though and im sorry for you man cheating its souch a cruel human instinct to want more and be unsatisfied with something that you already have thats so great already but this is a good work of art but one thing

and loves me more than you did.
on this line i think itd help the flow if you omitted the word did
and

I hope you take what you said to me to your final end.
i think you should rephrase this line i mean its good and understandable but i feel it slows you down when reading it