Broken Heart

A song I wrote after I got my heart broken. I know it's short... lol

You've caused darkness to my world,

you've made me feel so small and cold.

You've made me lose all hope and happiness

The air up here is cool and calm,

I see you standing down there looking up at me.

How could you have been so cruel,

To go ahead and break my heart?

You knew that I loved you and you still went ahead.

How do you feel with all this guilt in your head?

Take a bow, leave, get out, the show is over,

and your no longer mine.

You've broken my heart in 1000 pieces,

you didn't even hesitate with your answer.

It was her that you wanted all along,

and now the best thing that you ever had is long gone.

Don't think I am lying because if I wasn't i wouldn't be dying.

How could you have been so cruel,

To go ahead and break my heart?

You knew that I loved you and you still went ahead.

How do you feel with all this guilt in your head?

Take a bow, leave, get out, the show is over,

and your no longer mine.

Go let some other girl break your heart,

and then come crawling back tell me how it feels,

I gotta say i never really thought you were true,

I just did it because I loved you.

Reviews

[kewlbluetiger]

Nice details and a ton of emotion. I felt like I was almost reading a letter! Wow I enjoyed it. We really do feel deceived when someone cheats on us. Strong reflection! I enjoyed the read.

[Hippy]

enjoyed i sang it all the way through tho if it was my peice i would change it up slightly nut good never the less and if you want to know what lines i would change up feel free to ask oh and one typo last line you cant miss it

[Bright Eyes]

This song definitely has a lot of emotion in it. It conveys well the feelings of betrayal and, I think, anger.