Abandoned

This is how I truly am sometimes =[ I don't like it. If it doesn't make sense, tell me in a review that it didn't make sense, totally, fine it didn't make sense to me realy.

I over analyze everything,

what can I do? 

I'm now abandoned,

or that's what it seems. 

Things build in my mind,

none are ever right. 

I over analyze what they say,

I take it too personally. 

I need to stop and listen,

before it's too late. 

Why does this happen to me?

I turn good people bad and bad people good.

I never wanted that to happen, 

it's just I'm so needy...

I'm trying my hardest not to be,

I need to learn how to be by myself. 

I love my friends way too much that's why, 

I always feel abandoned. 

One best friend at school,

who only cares about her ex boyfriend. 

I'm pushed off to the side,

I yearn for attention,

and when I don't get it. 

I cry,

I die. 

I have to learn to be on my own, 

right now I'm not having fun,

I guess it's because I feel abandon. 

Author's Note

I over analyze a lot of things and I hurt my own feelings by turning something so harmless into murder. if you understand what I mean lol

Reviews

[The Last Poetic King]

We always feel these emotions, people tend to hide it. Though I must say good job.

[Hippy]

i am pretty sure i get this in i feel the same way sometimes, kind of, i think but when it happens to me the other me starts argueing with me to keep my head in line and to not pull me down

[Broken.]

I know exactly how you feel. Thus, in this review I can't say what has already been totally clarified in this. I do like it, really. Sad, but I settle into these abandoned spells at times too. With a best friend that I love too much, needy for her attention, she's got other things on her mind. I've been through it and written many poems just like this (:

[itsjustme]

i can understand the pain. my days go up and down depending on how much critcism my friends and family give me. im not very social and the more someone points this out the worse i feel about myself. i know i need to change and improve but fear is holding me back. great write sorry if that was a little to personal.

[ashley]

i'm the exact same way. i like this poem, i can feel the frustration and the hurt. good job! :D