Dark Magic

For all of the jerks who hurt me!!!

His words he spoke were black magic,

they were intend to hurt.

I wish they weren't so horrific. 

I fell face down in the dirt. 

You destroyed my one and only heart,

with a sharp knife.

I saw you use your hands and rip it apart. 

It's as if you didn't care about my life. 

You leave me here to sit and cry,

is this what you wanted? 

I now know you weren't the guy.

Now I'm forever haunted. 

I will always live with this pain. 

One day at a time. 

It will never go down the drain. 

What you did was a horrible crime. 

To me you'll always be a prick,

I don't care what people say. 

Don't go and gloat that I wasn't your pick. 

I still remember everything to this very day. 

You're words were beyond tragic,

I'll never forget them. 

because they were black magic. 

Reviews

[Hippy]

i liked this alot the ending really captured me and it really shows how people are horrible people, only real good people are aliens and dogs

[Frantzuu]

I like the ending, great poem. I'm just sitting here thinking about it lol
it's deep.

You're words were beyond tragic,
I'll never forget them.
because they were black magic.

Love these 3 lines. great job. :D

[Poetic Beauty]

The rhyme of this poem flows naturally. I love the phrase your words were black magic. I think we have all had some one do this to us at one time or another and that phrase is a wonderful way to show how deeply hurtful and uncaring the words were.

[Abhinav]

A totally awesome one this....loved the way you rhymed a pr*** with pick...haha.....
nicely done,the rhymings were top notch....
''His words he spoke were black magic,
they were intend to hurt.
I wish they weren't so horrific''...the best lines according to me........
Well,i'm certainly shelving this in my library..FOR THE FIRST TIME EVER!
I fell face down in the dirt.

[Aimee Mahathy]

Oh wow, this is great! I totally know where you're coming from in this. Very good! Really expressive~