Nighmare

You're the nightmare I face every day,

he thinks I'm completely useless.

You never listen to anything I say. 

I sit in my seat helpless. 

I can't cry hard enough,

do you like making me feel small?

s**t boy you think you're so tough.

Or do you just like watching me fall. 

One day it's all gonna come back and haunt you,

maybe you'll have learned.

I know you won't know what to do.

That all your insults burned. 

All those years of making me feel like crap,

I can't tell you what it feels like.

YOU'LL NEVER BE ABLE TO TAKE IT BACK!

Hahaha I'm just kidding, Psych! 

I hope you hear what I have to say,

because you're only one thing to me.

You're the nightmare I face every day. 

Reviews

[Daniel Gardner]

I love the way this is written. I've heard so many people say things exactly like this.... Its sad but true. You got the emotion across really well in the is piece. Good work.

[Aimee Mahathy]

Wow, this is heavy stuff! I could really identify with this one. It reminded me of my feeling towards this one guy who used me. :/
The contrast of bold and italics was perfect! And the tone you used in each separate line was appropriate for each!
This was amazing!

[kewlbluetiger]

Really nice poem. The formatting is awesome! It's blunt and in-your-face with the practicality of knowing someone who makes us feel like crap! We all have our "nightmarish" relationships. Great job capturing it poetically.

[Frantzuu]

I feel like I've known you forever when I read your poems, :)

[The Last Poetic King]

The ending was perfect to this, good job on this piece.

[Abhinav]

haha...loved it.....really loved this poem....
''All those years of making me feel like crap,
I can't tell you what it feels like.
YOU'LL NEVER BE ABLE TO TAKE IT BACK!''...THIS PART WAS THE BEST!...the way you put the text in bold to highlight ur anger was very good.....keeep on posting

[Matt]

I love this poems syntax! it was so interesting to read.
Thanks for sending the request. i really liked this poem.

[ashley]

this is fantastic! I really liked this. great job! :D

[bre]

This is a very interesting poem there's only one line I didn't get, "hahaha I'm just kidding, psych."

I like this poem because it can be read three different ways the first way, is the obvious way read it as a whole, the second way, read only the bold lines and third read only the normal text, all three ways make sense. Idk if this was on purpose but either way nice write.

bre

[Joe]

Nice job!