Hung Up

there is always someone who we just can't let go

Why am I so hung up on you? 

Maybe because I never spoke up. I never had the gut to tell you. 

I don’t think I could muster, muster up the courage to say it. 

I’m better off in the dark. 

Your lips so pink and gorgeous, I’d love to kiss you. 

Your smile so amazing and handsome, can I hold you? 

Brown hair, blue eyes and don’t forget your freckles. 

We could listen to records and get lost, amongst the stars and talk. 

I still remember the first day I met you, I can still remember every laugh we shared.

Why didn’t I speak up? Would this have all gone away? 

I think about you every day. 

Should I just tell you? 

And if I did, would it even matter, that I am so hung up on you? 

Author's Note

shaking off the dust. Hope you enjoy it!

Reviews

[Ranger Kessel]

Romantic. My advice is tell them

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This was great. I could feel the pent-up emotion straining to break out of the lines and wrestle resistance to the floor. Great write, I enjoyed the read.

[no tell writer]

This is a lovely, wonderful write

[Levi Levin]

Sounds romantic and mysterious. Great job!

[Just Kim]

I love this write, when I first clicked on it, I thought about a phone call, that you hung up on someoene. I enjoyed this especially toward the end. emotional read, love this...

[Nix is typing...]

I really like this one :) you colored the way your emotions were screaming inside your head very well! I've felt this way about someone, so I know how you felt. I didn't say anything because I knew they were too out of my league, I kept seeing them, day after day, thinking: I'm going to have to switch gyms. 😆 Great poem, you displayed your emotions well. 100/100

[Moth Phoenix]

Hey!
Thank you so much :) That was my exact situation too, but at work!!

[Audie G. Couch]

I agree with Van Dyke, this is an excellent poem. One that is brave, and filled with love.

[The dark Hydra]

I did not...but thanks for hopeing

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Lovely write. This poem doesn't just start it opens up and it is so wonderfully explained and expressed. Tyfs