Under the Stars

Love song

Under the Stars 

Stars shine so bright, close my eyes and we're together tonight.

So my words ain't perfect, but baby they're comin from my heart, the stars are shining oh so brightly, tiptoe in my room quietly. Wrapped up in your arms I wanna see a shooting star, but babe you're too far. Under the stars tonight, alone just you and I, I love you, oh baby I love you. Under the stars we shine so brightly, and you whisper to me quietly 

Baby oh baby when you're feelin' lonely, oh so lonely,

just look up, just look up  and I'm there.

Cause under the stars is where you shine,

baby your so divine. Under the stars oh under the stars

you look so fine, and I'm happy that you're mine. 

Every night we're away is a struggle,

but I know deep down we can get through. 

When I'm all wrapped up in your arms you kissing me, and holding me,

I know this is where I belong, oh baby. 

Under the stars tonight, alone just you and I, I love you, oh baby I love you. Under the stars we shine so brightly, and I whisper to you quietly. 

Baby oh baby when you're feelin' lonely, oh so lonely, 

just look up, just look up and you'll see me. 

Cause under the stars is where you shine,

baby please stay on the line,

you look so fine, and I'm happy I made you mine. 

Stars are shooting, planets are living.

Earth is turning the sun is shining. 

Forever in your eyes I will stay

what more can I say… 

Baby oh baby when you're feelin' lonely, oh so lonely,

just look baby just look up and you'll see me.

Cause under the stars is where we shine,

handsome you're so devine,

you look s o fine, and baby I'm happy I made you mine. 

Cause under the stars…cause under the stars

is where I fell in love with you. 

Author's Note

Please give me critiques! :) Thank you!

Reviews

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

This is like a lyrical song, there were points in it where I wished I could make someone feel like that.

[Jack...]

Very nice, have you written a melody for it?

[Moth Phoenix]

Not yet, but hopefully sometime in the near future i could accomplish that!

[Hippy]

I found it very cute, when i got to the 2nd stanza it reminded me of joe dirt and how if he was looking up at the moon he felt his parents looking up at the moon. but they weren't, Brandi was, she had his real home in Silvertown. but just the way he talks about looking up at the moon and finding what felt like home and love etc is what i got out of this song

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

That was quite fun and sweet... love always has the most beautiful melody.