the last smile

Missing someone's heart

the last smile

I Sat down

on top of the sandy soil

next to the beach of paradise

watching waves cuddling

inside the ocean

afterwards my garden

had paid a visit to the sweet memories, then i closed my eyes

for few minutes and seconds

then the garden

began to enjoy the moments

i had with the queen of fountains

whilst i kept smiling alone

then afterwards saw a single tear

flowing in the left cheek

that's where  i silently cried, thought she could come back yet again !

then i asked myself

why did i let her glide alone?

maybe should I go amends

the shuttered breathe?

or is it too late for us?

Author's Note

Good day fellows
Hope you shall enjoy this peace of my epigrams and please feel free
To let me know where should I improve

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Your first verse painted the scene. Several nice poetic lines in this poem. Keep writing.

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Wow thanks a lot it makes me feels to write more

[Chris Shaw]

That's the idea. Keep your pen working

[April Blue]

I really enjoyed reading this, a nice feast of words..

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Wow thanks it means a lot