Forgoten

A Poem by Dawn

FORGOTEN

STARS ABOVE US

THE GROUND BELOW US

THE STARS ARE BRIGHT

THE GROUND IS GREY

PEOPLE ARE COLORFUL

AND DAYS ARE FORGOTEN

PEOPLE ALWAYS SAY

FORGET THE PAST BECAUSE

TODAY IS A NEW DAY

DONT WORRIE ABOUT TOMOROW

CAUSE YOU DONT KNOW WHAT IT HOLDS

TODAY

Author's Note

IGNORE ANY MISTAKES

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Again you poem started very well and got lost again towards the end, this also has great potential with a little more work.

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Added on March 28, 2008

theres not much to say i love writing poetry i like to writ bout what has happened to me and my feelings more..

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