WITH YOU

OUTSIDE DOSENT MATTER ONLY THE INSIDE DOES

WITH YOU

WITH YOU I SEE PREETY THINGS

YOU ARE AS THEY COME

YOU ARE AS KIND SWEET AND

CARING PERSON ON THE

INSIDE BUT ON THE OUTSIDE

YOU ARE A BIG PERSON

I LIKE YOU AND YOU LIKE ME

SO WE ARE AS ONE

 

Author's Note

DONT MIND GRAMMER PLEASE

Reviews

[Sally Edwards]

I get what you are saying and your poems start well and then I get the feeling the last bit is rushed, take your time, go back to it, keep reading it over and over and adding or changing bits. You have such great potential though, don't give up keep writing.