Live freely

A poem on close people who want to commit suicide

You feel the need to die
I want you to live freely
Your so young yet so put down it kills me
so much has happened over the years and its driving you crazy
you want to slit your writs and die crying in your blood
what am I going to do without you?
I care to much
please don't ever leave me
your more important than you think
Why end your life when it's just begun?
Your like my sister
your a wonderful friend
if you end your life
the be ready for me to be at the gate with you
for i refuse to live
A life without you
I love you too much
So please,


Live freely

Author's Note

for a handful of people...

Reviews

[~Death The Kid~ ☜..]

:(

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Reaching out as a true friend, great poem.

[Gone.]

This is soo cool, Kinda written for me, I have suicidal thoughts sometimes, Thnx

[dachildofevil]

And this why i support To Write Love On Her Arms :(

[Lily Mae]

I think so many people don't have a clue as to what it does to the people that loved them that are left behind.. It's happened to me and it crushes you wondering what you could have done differently...what could you have said.. and it never goes away.. xx you penned the feelings well..xx

[Cherryblossom]

omg i liked it made me cry

[⌈☾Star At M..]

Light,
i love it! :)

[~Death The Kid~ ☜..]

coolio...