Tears and screams

In the night of the full moon
the young child cried
he lost everything in that fire
his family,his home,his life.
they had past on,he had stayed
He screamed at himself for not going with them
The years would pass
He would stay
untouched by time
at the tender age of 14
People would come and go
all he could do was watch
he cried for a new life
he screamed for his family
He cried when Satan's evil hands grabbed him
he screamed when they dragged him to Hell

Reviews

[Frank (spelled with a "..]

It tells such a sad story-- but it's very good!
It's powerful and touching and just.. it's very good.

[K.D. Sage]

Very insightful.

[Apathy To Empathy]

This was very interseting, and very well put together :}

[Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of..]

Wow this was a very touching piece :)
I really enjoyed it :)

[fatalsymphonies]

powerful, the last two lines, just wow. "He cried when Satan's evil hands grabbed him He screamed when they dragged him to hell". Powerful, strong, this is an emotional poem here. The others here are correct about it being sad. The imagery of the crying, the people passing, it's like I can see him sitting while people walk by without seeing him, the years passing, like a slow motion, music-playing part of a movie. this was pretty good, i can visibly and physically feel his pain.

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Can I come out from hiding under the bed now, good poem ; )

[Cherryblossom]

sad but verry good

[Eben R.]

Sad, but i like it :)

[~Death The Kid~ ☜..]

LURVES IT :D