All Gone

Stay awake don't close your eyes,

What's coming next is a big surprise.

No one knows what will happen,

Because you just got you're heart broken.

No matter what happens,

You have to stay strong.

It's ok to cry now,

Just don't cry too long.

Drowning in you're sorrow,

Is the wrong path to choose.

Wipe away you're tears now,

She is all gone.

You will find a new lover,

Because she is all gone.

 

Reviews

[Natalie]

I like how you don't encourage to drown yourself in self pity. It can be really hard not to do that though. You're very strong, great poem.

[Emma Lee]

Amazing, just like the others :]

Keep it up, kid. ;)

Love Emily

[Shelbeh-Saur-Rawr-Ness]

Matt I love it! This is wonderful!