Lost

when faith is lost, you have nothing to live for
you have been lied to, it feels like you’ve been pushed to the floor
your life is being washed away, your losing it every day
and when you have finally had enough, it’s hard to even act tough
just throw yourself against a wall, and slit every inch of your body
then let out one last yell and cry one last tear to show that you really care
even if the others dont, just slowly die
because you know that no other person that knows you will ever cry

Reviews

[Matthew Kult]

Well written and good flow. Don't see many like this that flow this well. Great job

[Natalie]

I'm real sorry about that. When someone lies to you, you sometimes wonder if you can trust that person or not. But don't we all lie at times? Well it was great poem. I loved how it was so deep and true.

[Jami Nicole]

Scotty, you should publish some of these. O.O It was depressing but I loved it. :P I also agree with Em, don't be sad!!

I loves you like a brother!
Jami

[Shelbeh-Saur-Rawr-Ness]

Aw Matt. Now im Sad. Everyone has something to live for. It takes a while to figure it out. But it is true

Your Newest Buddy,and your little piece of Toast says Hi, Storm!

[Emma Lee]

Don't be sad Matt, when your sad I'm sad because I love you.

Love, Emily

[blaze887]

Yeah, it is about me, but i trusted one of my best friends alot then he started telling me lies. XP It was all one big, infuriating mess.

[Natalie]

I'm guessing this poem is about you...if so, what did you have faith in before you lost it?