My Life Is Gone

Sadness is lingering in the stars
Only here to bring us cuts and scars
When you're always depressed
And feeling like a mess
You cant escape the darkness you have become
When you’ll never be the same again
You’ve come to a dramatic end
It’s all over for you
You cant stand next to me
And i cant stand next to you
My life is gone….
~by: Scott

Reviews

[Ben]

I like your profile photo. It is in itself a poetry, if you look at it and analyze it.
It is just a beaut. I wonder how many takes on that photo. I like to see the others and compare it.

As for the poem, nice.

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime two people can create a separation. Nothing can separate some people. A very strong poem. A lot of emotion and disappointment is felt in your words. A very good poem.
Coyote

[Natalie]

Very deep. I love it

[TTBoy28]

Short, sweet, and deep! Third line: "your" should be "you're." Very nice! Sad...but nice!