The love from another century

Dear loved one,

        You remind me of  a rose that is given

        to a loved one, a dove flying high in the sky,

        The wind beneath my wings.

          Your eyes are like two stars that

           twinkle in the moonlight, your smile is

             like chocolate that melts in the sun,

            Your laugh is like a babys first word so precious.

        Your personality is like a thousand words coming together.

       when i'm with you i want to melt in

              your arms, i want to watch the sunset go down in a starlit sky,

                I would go a million different paths with you.

                  My love will be with you forever and always no matter how hard times get

    Yours, forever and ever.

Reviews

[Summer'sBreeze]

This is a great poem!
Good write and welcome to WC!!

[ciara anders]

can i get some reviews plz