This was such a cute poem :) it made me think of having a crush in high school. So sweet and simple. This is how lov is supposed to be. Innocent and caring. Nice job :)
I didn't realize how much I love giddiness until just now! I do love to be giddy, except not so much in a love situation. I'm just giddy about life. But your poem isn't heavy on the love connection, it's more just about describing the sensations, which you do so well. I love the way you do these "trilogies" of repetition with variation, very effective, some of the most effective repetitions I've seen! *smile* Now I'll be giddy for the rest of the day! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Love can be a wonderful feeling when in the beginning stages. The possibilities; knowing that someone is thinking of only you; having someone by your side, is all part of the wonder of someone new.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
wish it could reach that point and hoping to make it right but then still early to say
Ah, be still your beating heart :)
I think giddiness is something that we feel not enough of, and brings excitement and energy into our lives, with the hopes of what ifs and maybes still up in the air, waiting to be decided by the fates of our destiny.
That childish rush of fizzing inside, no matter what age we are when it calls. I think the last time I was giddy was when I had a concussion, but maybe next time it will work out better for me, as I hope it does for you. :)
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
oh yes lorry it is the bullseye thing thanks for this wonderful review