forgive

The prayer has been

My secret weapon

As I continue to fight

The battles in life.

 

I have been scarred,

Destroyed and ruined.

 

I never thought it

Could happen to me,

 

I want to ask why?

But then I simply can’t.

 

I want to let FATHER TIME

Do his job once again.

 

I want to forgive her

With understanding this time.

Reviews

[lil drummerboy]

This was really good and loved the entire thing.

[sette]

thanks for an insightful review

[noname]

I can see your struggle from an external point of view, how you see yourself, for example. Only recently have I learned to avoid doing this in my own writing. I like that it captures how desperately you want to move on and forgive this person, but I think you could more strongly capture the complexities and struggles on the journey of forgiveness.

[sette]

it is such a hard road to trek at this time but thanks for dropping by and the encouragement too

[Lorry]

We can only hope that time will move on for us all and point us towards the path we are meant to take. It's all we can hope for when waiting for the next part of the puzzle to fall into place.

[sette]

yes definitely my friend and thanks for the concern always

[KCthelastboyscout]

Just thinking about forgiveness you're ready to take the next step.theres no time limit to take it.whenever you feel it in your heart

[sette]

it definitely will take a longer time because until now it still hurts to remember

[Stella Armour]

It is not always easy to forgive, although in many ways it is healing. Often i find i can forgive but i cannot forget ..

[sette]

totally true stella totally true

[...]

I think we all wish same. Forgivness is such power but its take lot of courage. Your poem its feel and also maybe its beautiful prayer.

[sette]

thank you martin for the concern and appreciation

[Mrudula Rani]

Prayer has such a healing power. Meditation puts so many life's problems in perspective. You found a perfect path to gain power to forgive some one.
I hope you grow stronger each day and find peace and happiness so that the pain of past has no more power to hurt you.

[sette]

thanks my friend for the wishes and concern

[Mrudula Rani]

You are most welcome.

[Chris Shaw]

If you can learn to forgive, then you will have found the key to a more peaceful life. Not easily done, needs working on. A nice little poem, with a lot of meaning sette.

Chris

[sette]

thanks chris for the insightful review

[Jimmy Yetts]

Admirable sentiments.
Much of life is learning to forgive our way to forgiveness.
Meaningful bit of work!

[sette]

still hard to do my friend but will give it a try

[Eiram]

Yep, tama ka, let the god heal your pain, 👍👍.Marami ka naman friends dito kaya magshare ka lang ng magaganda mong tula.

[sette]

un ang gagawin ko thanks