soon

Time is the barrier between us,

I am busy with work and studies,

I am really sorry for that,

I want to be with you.

I really want to.

 

But my schedule is really

Something else,

It is as if a day is not enough

To complete my tasks

And more to come.

 

I wish I can have a

Spare day to share with you,

To enjoy a wonderful moment with you,

And I really hope it can come to that.

Hopefully very soon….

 

Reviews

[barleygirl]

In one way, I take your message at face value, believing your narrator, that his/her intentions are real. But in today’s world full of catfishing lovers, it’s so common to be led along this way, promise after promise, that someday the veil will be lifted & the mystery lover can be seen firsthand & touched & loved proper. Unfortunately, I’m too jaded to believe the earnest version of your poem. I guess if someone really wants to make time, they will find a way. Some can’t unhitch themselves from chronic busy-ness. I remember someone told me I was chronically busy. That’s what this poem sounds like to me. Instead of convincing me that anything will ever happen “soon” . . . I’m convinced it never will happen! *sigh!* Fondly, Margie

[sette]

yes you are right margie he is the last in my priority list hahaha when you get to this age it seems that relationship takes a backseat to something else

[Crowley]

Ohhhh Yeahhh. So difficult to juggle life and relationship in this day and age when there are so many tome constraints. Taking that kind of time for ourselves and the ones we love is important. Great look at what has become life.

[sette]

that is so true thanks for a wonderful review

[...]

Time and space can really put people on appart. But when is love stronger then anything so is not matter. Cause you know soon all will be over. Good poem.

[sette]

thanks martin and i like your pen name better than the old one

[...]

You welcome . I was quiet tired from my old name. After rereading again stranger by Camus. I choose put there stranger in original French language. Cause more then often I feel really like stranger.

[Wild Rose]

It has always been like that > Still is even in retirement > So much to do > we need more time: to do the jobs: to go see places

[sette]

that is so true thanks my friend

[¿]

Huh...the time!
Spares none....sometimes for revenge but sometimes even for letting you enjoy!!
Hope your time of share comes soon😊

[sette]

thanks my friend for the nice review i appreciate it

[¿]

Wc😊.......!!

[Jimmy Yetts]

Modern life is hectic.
Despite so many time-saving devices, we don't seem to be able to recover any of that saved time.
Woe is us!

[sette]

that is so true my friend

[Ardra]

Sweet poem Sette...:)
Just like you...

[sette]

thanks my friend for the appreciation and the sweet words too