soon

Time is the barrier between us,

I am busy with work and studies,

I am really sorry for that,

I want to be with you.

I really want to.

 

But my schedule is really

Something else,

It is as if a day is not enough

To complete my tasks

And more to come.

 

I wish I can have a

Spare day to share with you,

To enjoy a wonderful moment with you,

And I really hope it can come to that.

Hopefully very soon….

 

Reviews

[Ms Paragon]

So many things,so little time!I enjoyed the concept of time as a barrier!Well done!

[sette]

thanks for a very insightful review

[Ms Paragon]

My pleasure!

[Relic]

Too many desires and not enough time to fulfill them. I think--and know--many can relate to this.

[sette]

thanks my friend for a very nice review

[Onlyme]

sweet poem. made me smile and understand about not enough hours in the day to do everything you wish or want to be able to do.

[sette]

thanks for the wonderful review

[lightsong]

That's a wish most of us want and desire too, for me, I would do it, and I would through everything to give time to my loved ones, give them love and feel blessed with them, life is too short, and we must take the chances or make them if they are not there... I hope soon, so soooooon You will be able to enjoy Your dreamy day.

[sette]

yes i definitely will my friend

[Chris Shaw]

A rotating world, spinning far too quickly. We are all too busy ands sometimes I would like to say 'stop the world I want to get off'. Many will relate sette to your words. Hoping you soon find some space to do what you would like to do instead of what you need to do.

Chris

[sette]

thanks for the beautiful insight chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we are just too busy to live life...and one day we will regret that we didn't just stop and hold the roses in our hands and hearts.

[sette]

that is so true jacob i wish i can really spare a day for him

[Donna]

These days everyone is so busy with school, work, homework, etc. It makes it hard for any personal time! Nice poem sette!

[sette]

thanks donna for the nice review always

[peter Duggan]

Nice realistic poem you have written here Sette, Makes me glad that I lived my life without ambition. Never made much money but had a beautiful relaxed life. I enjoyed the read, my friend....Peter

[sette]

that i am happy for you my friend

[Arya]

Good, realistic poem depicting the current scenario , everyone is busy with their own work and no one really seems to have much time to spare for some other important things too!

[sette]

that is so true thanks for the wonderful review

[Neville]

There are many of us who share the desire to have more time to devote to others, whether they be family, friends or lovers.. many of us are so blooming sad, that a bit of extra time just for ourselves would be a blessing.... I am sure most will relate to the main theme of this delightful little poem..... N

[sette]

thank you my friend for a wonderful and nice review as always

[Neville]

no problem... have a lovely day.. N