Very nice to meet you Lisette! This is a lovely, witty, delightful, insightful, upbeat poem. So well-written and flows so rhythmically and naturally. Language, imagery, references all excellent. Love this poem! “Saint Elizabeth with a french twist”- great line. Kept my interest from start to finish. Celebration of sette- Brava!
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
thank you my friend for the words of encouragement and appreciation.
That was sooo sweet! and really enjoyable, Your flow was nicely amazing, the title is perfect too, I kept smiling while reading Your poem, Thank You for sharing it, I wish You the best in Your contest!
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
my friend i am happy that i made you smile and thanks for the encouragement and the wonderful review
You could be writing about my wife (The Lass)
Also Gemini
Has the sweet tooth
Also diabetic
Naughty girls sneaks snacks
She also loves her food
So do we to use shes the 'best cook in the world'
So back to the point
Your description fits her (almost) perfectly > you are both (unrelated) twins
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
wow i have an unrelated twin and i am a good cook too talk about coincidence huh
6 Years Ago
Just what I thought as I read your poem
Cept mine like outdoors > Gamekeepers daughter read moreJust what I thought as I read your poem
Cept mine like outdoors > Gamekeepers daughter
Are you a craft worker; like her ?
A nice way of finding out about who you are sette. It's good to take stock at times, to recognise your best points without glossing over your faults. We all have faults and many of us have made them when it comes to love. Good luck with the contest and I enjoyed reading about you.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
thank you dear christine for a wonderful review and the words of encouragement too
Congrats sa contest.may pamangkin akong babae na gemini at grabe energy niya.malakas din kumain,walang tanggi at mahilig sa matamis.3 yrs.old pa lang siya.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
magkakasundo kami hahaha... contest entry pa lang wala pang judgment di naman importante ang manalo .. read moremagkakasundo kami hahaha... contest entry pa lang wala pang judgment di naman importante ang manalo magparticipate lang. thanks sa review
My eastern sign is rabbit. I find it eastern astrology more accurate to describe human nature. Rabbits are creative , but they are searching for long time to find purpose at they lives. Only what I member about rats they are very clever. Your poem is straight , honest and have nice flow. You chose very good words cause they match together very well. I lIke how you use European symbols from history.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
thank you very much my friend for a wonderful review