the game

the game

A Poem by sette

One chance,

Two chances,

Three chances,

 

You’re out,

 

This is a game

I play,

Where love is concerned.

 

You hurt me first time,

I get it,

It was not intentional.

 

You hurt me second time,

I get it,

You are just human,

 

You hurt me third time,

now, I don’t get it,

it is intentional.

 

Where did I go wrong?

for you to hurt me

many times.

 

Now, you’re out,

Out of my life for good.

 


© 2018 sette


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Sometimes we need to open our eyes after the second chance one the mistakes are repeated again- I don’t believe people hurt others by mistakes- each person has control over their actions and knows what they are doing- best apart from someone who keeps hurting you 🌹

Posted 6 Years Ago


sette

6 Years Ago

yes but sometimes when you love a person too much you tend to be irrational but thanks for the words.. read more
Old Grandpa saying. Once a mistake. Twice, you are foolish. Three times, you are a dummy. I liked the thoughts and the wisdom learn. Second chances, rarely work. Too much baggage is being carry. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


sette

6 Years Ago

i am so kind my friend that i am really stupid when it comes to love thanks for the appreciation and.. read more
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

All of us are foolish with love. We hope love can save us. You are welcome my dear friend.
sette

6 Years Ago

thanks for the understanding and the insight
A game so many know only too well. I wonder why the games adults play differ so much from those of our youth, bringing so much pain, when in youth they brought joy and friendship.
I sometimes think that grown ups should never be allowed to be in charge of anuthing and that kids sense will prevail.
We can but hope.

Posted 6 Years Ago


sette

6 Years Ago

and if we can just go back to the time that everything was happy and joyful and deep in our hearts w.. read more
You are more than fair. You must have really liked this person to
be so patient and or hopeful.

Take care - Dave

Posted 6 Years Ago


sette

6 Years Ago

yup i did dave and what happened have to let him go... lol
Guess it makes sense isn't it... :)
Like 3 life lines....

Posted 6 Years Ago


sette

6 Years Ago

yup it is thanks for a wonderful review
i also think 3 chances are 2 too many.
If he gets away with it once then he will think he can get away with it again :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


sette

6 Years Ago

when i am in love my friend i am really stupid, thanks for a wonderful review
Stella Armour

6 Years Ago

it's all about self-respect.... if he really cared about you he would never do anything to hurt you,.. read more
sette

6 Years Ago

ok he has been gone in my life and still in the process of healing. thanks for the wonderful words o.. read more
You are far too kind in trying to understand someone who hurts you one too many times! With each callous behavior of that person the distance between you and the offender increases to the point of no return.( I still think 3 chances are too many).

Posted 6 Years Ago


sette

6 Years Ago

yup my middle name is patience i think or maybe ive got a forgiving heart.. thanks for the advise an.. read more
Mrudula Rani

6 Years Ago

Forgiving heart is a true gift.All the best.
Oo THREE chances
Second chance put them on the back burner
Leave then alone and have look around

Mind one of my ex's only gave me one > her fault any way > too eager and rushed

Posted 6 Years Ago


sette

6 Years Ago

hahaha... still an experience worth remembering
Its rare to see it when people have a limit in love, so this is nice for a change ^ ^, nice short poem :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


sette

6 Years Ago

thanks much for a wonderful review
Tis good to see the third strike rule is still being applied.....lesson learnt maybe.....

Posted 6 Years Ago


sette

6 Years Ago

no my friend patience is a rare virtue hahaha
Neville

6 Years Ago

indeed it is.........

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