To love again

this is for some people...

Once bitten, twice shy

Have been in that course

For many years now,

 

I leave no room

For loving someone new,

For knowing a person more.

 

Friendship is the only thing

I can offer at present,

And nothing more than that.

 

Life had played a bad joke at me,

Ended up with Cupid’s broken arrow.

 

Time heals all wounds,

I fervently pray,

That one day I can say,

I could love again.

Reviews

[Donna]

I enjoyed this one a lot as I see many did from your reviews. Its a subject I believe we can all relate too. You wrote it beautifully!

[sette]

thank you very much donna

[Govind singh]

Love brings both happy and sad moment..but trust both are the sweetest feelings in the world..:)

[sette]

that i totally agree to

[Ivory]

Never give up on love. I found it the second time around, and it was more wonderful that the first time.
I enjoyed this piece.

[sette]

thanks ivory for the encouragement and review too

[wordman]

love has it`s painful side,but we have to try

[sette]

hopefully i will have the courage to do so

[Orange]

Love is the most pure feeling.
a friend could be the best to heal all the wounds that you have created for yourself and othets.
And im pretty sure, you are blessed.
Good read :)

[sette]

thanks my friend for the wonderful review

[Ardra]

Mmm :)
Second time..third time is lucky I think they say heheh
Maybe someday..we all will find that heart which will respond to our heart beat the same way and we will learn to smile...once again...

[sette]

looking forward to it my friend

[¿]

Just give love a little place in your heart and forgive life for once then you can love again anyone or anything you want to! Right now it may not fit but slowly it'll make it's niche for it's own.

[sette]

i hope my friend to have that feeling again

[Alice.H.Austen]

This is so clear and so relatable, it was like looking at a mirror reflection. Honestly loved this and how well you flowed your writing through it. I enjoyed how it read like a rhyme without actually being one.

[sette]

thanks for the wonderful review

[Lilly]

This is absolutely beautiful and it speaks volumes to me. The phrasing is really nice. I like how it sometimes seems like it's about to rhyme bit it doesn't. I don't know if that was intentional, but that's how I read it. I like the lines, "Life had played a bad joke at me, Ended up with Cupid’s broken arrow." There's not a part of it that I don't like, and I'm not a big fan of poetry, so you did amazing on this! Thanks for publishing this because I really enjoyed reading it.

[sette]

thanks for a very wonderful review. i am not that good in rhyming. i am more for free verse style

[Dave]

Love is some times very difficult. When it hurts us the pain is something we often feel
we cannot bear. Other times it comes without warning, even though we aren't looking
for it , it manages to find us. I wrote a short story that I posted here that dealt with that.
You might enjoy: "The Picture".

Don't give up on love. It's out there, perhaps where you least expect to find it.
Take care - Dave

[sette]

hopefully dave it is the right time but i can't feel it