darkness

In moments of solitude,

I feel darkness enveloping around me.

Too many questions remained unanswered.

What has been life to me?

Reviews

[Wesley]

Questions we ask ourselves in the darkest moments of our lives, bring the greatest light. I love your poem.

[sette]

thank you wesley for the appreciation and wonderful review

[Coyote Poetry]

Long and dark night where we can't sleep. The mind can wander and make us loco. I do understand this poem. I must meditate to sleep. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[sette]

thanks again john

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[ellen]

This totally reminds me of Shel Silverstein, because of how it is structured and its length but with a darker theme. I love it! After reading a couple of times it becomes more relatable but the first time it was just very impactful and thought-provoking.

[sette]

thanks for the wonderful review ellen i really learned a lot.

[poetgurl]

Short with a strong impact on your words. well done

[sette]

thanks jane for the review

[Diane]

Short but full that's for sure.

[sette]

thanks diane for the wonderful review

[Diane]

Welcome. Wonderful poem wonderful review

[sette]

true very true

[KCthelastboyscout]

In that room of darkness if you turn on the light you will find you are not alone.in fact that room will be overcrowded.too many questions indeed...

[sette]

yes that is always the feeling thanks kc for the wonderful review

[R.E. Ray]

A good question to ponder in the dark. It's healthy to take time for self-reflection. While some might find this poem a bit dark, it's the opposite to me. I love the candle image you paired with the poem. When I read this piece, I wondered... Is the writer the flame, or the person looking into it? It's light nonetheless.. hope. A good piece in few words.

[sette]

thanks robert for the appreciation