UNDERSTANDING

THE CREATIVE JUICES 

KEEP ON POURING

THAT I CAN'T STOP WRITING.

THERE WERE THOSE TIMES

JUST LIKE THIS ONE,

THAT I FEEL MY WRITING

WAS MY HAVEN.

MY HAVEN FROM ALL THE HURTS

I HAVE EXPERIENCED LOVING YOU.

YOU, OF ALL PEOPLE

DID NOT UNDERSTAND

ABOUT MY WORK OR MY WRITING.

IT WAS ALWAYS A BATTLE

BASED ON YOUR MALE EGO AND

INSECURITY.

IT WAS TOO TIRING 

UNTIL I DON'T HAVE ANY RECOURSE

BUT TO LET YOU GO.

Reviews

[Ghost]

i believe if the one you love doesn't understand your poetry maybe the don't want or have the time to understand you. I think being understood, and valued for what, and who we are is so important for a better love.. Thanks for sharing

[sette]

you are absolutely right in all counts my friend

[Karen Redburn]

Writing, a magical world in which we can choose reality or fantasy. It is a safe haven for writers, we control the genre, form and words. What we cannot control and my favorite thing about writing is we cannot control how others interpret. Love is a powerful thing, so elusive and finicky. You have shared perfectly the power play that exists when the imagination is greeted by a dominant force, in this case portrayed by a male. Do we drop our art or drop the dominant force? Wow, this one really got me thinking, great job. Cheers!

[sette]

thanks karen i missed your poems

[Coyote Poetry]

Easy to find safe haven in writing. Writing won't break your heart.
"THERE WERE THOSE TIMES
JUST LIKE THIS ONE,
THAT I FEEL MY WRITING
WAS MY HAVEN."
I understand the above lines. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[sette]

thanks friend took a long time for me to give a reaction. thanks for the wonderful review

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.