I Wouldn't Know What to do, if I Didn't Have you.

At night, I look over to see if your breathing

just so I know, I can keep breathing too.

Author's Note

It's short.

Reviews

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. wow! ... there's a universe of heart and soul here ... amazing ... and amazingly inspiring ...

[*Evelen*]

Awww :) This made me smile. The shortness I think makes it so sweet. The emotion fills the page! Well done:)

[paul]

lovely and ethereal. what a wonderful sentiment.

[paul]

short is good for my short mind.
and this poem doesn't need to be any longer.
it already says so much.

[Emily B]

oh, it may be short but so very full . . .

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Very short.
But at the same time, very precise and warm - the way you described it.
It shows the love and care you have for that person, and this is what makes the whole of it very beautiful.

[Patricia(:]

It's short, yet it's amazing. Such simple words, yet so heartfelt..This one simple sentence touched my heart

[Liz-z]

Aw, the cuties though, regardless whether if it's short or not! I loved it. Just pretending to be that certain person and looking over to a loved one and being able to breathe because of him. ^.^ supper cute!