Dear Freind,

Dear Freind,

A Poem by BlankPageTheory
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for a friend.

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Bury your razors,

I've come to replace them

you wont need them after me

your heart wont bleed, because I'll hold the bandage to it

 I will kiss and restore the love that once was

 I cant say I'll make you happy, but I will promise to try

I wont be another reason to tare your flesh

 I wont be another tear on your cheek

I wont be the pain in your heartaches, or the nightmare haunting your dreams

 Instead I'll be the one you can love and trust, a good friend.

© 2010 BlankPageTheory


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I wont be another reason to tare your flesh

I wont be another tear on your cheek
Nice two lines i like this poem it calls out to me slightly in a way i cant put my finger on, one of the things i love about your poems is they all have a story they arent just words put together cleverly nice job.
The poem feels like your breaking up with a boyfriend or husband or something and your trying to comfort him by loving him as friend instead of a lover, " Instead I'll be the one you can love and trust, a good friend." Well that's my interpretation anyhow.
Good poem and good read keep it up.,

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is wonderful, I can honestly relate to this. The fight is endless, but its worth being there even if its just a few less scars.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I wont be another reason to tare your flesh

I wont be another tear on your cheek
Nice two lines i like this poem it calls out to me slightly in a way i cant put my finger on, one of the things i love about your poems is they all have a story they arent just words put together cleverly nice job.
The poem feels like your breaking up with a boyfriend or husband or something and your trying to comfort him by loving him as friend instead of a lover, " Instead I'll be the one you can love and trust, a good friend." Well that's my interpretation anyhow.
Good poem and good read keep it up.,

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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