The Blue

i have no idea.

i see the woman in the distance

she is letting  her child's hand go

im crying uncontrollably

the ground opens up into a deep blackness

swallows the child whole

the mother picks up a gun

points it to me with blood shot eyes

shoots

the only thing i feel is her striking gaze pierce me

i dont feel the bullet

i dont feel myself fall to the ground

i see blue, instead of what i thought would be red

im covered in it

i look up to see the woman pulling the triger with the gun cocked in her mouth

the shot echos through the open room

i see more blue

the once before completly white room is now heartbeat red

im dying

but so alive at the same time

Author's Note

i dunno.

Reviews

[Liz-z]

Wow... that was... it left me speechless! It actually seems like you're the girl... Amazing.
Favorite lines:
"I see blue, instead of what I thought would be red
I'm covered in it"
sounds like the blood is cold, and so beautiful that it has a different color,if that makes sense...
"I see more blue,
The once before completely white room is now heartbeat red,"
From this crazy blue to heartbeat red, wow! Amazing color change... you see the right colors at the end, as the last thing. Amazing... :)