To The Dearest of Them All

dear you,
i see you and, how you look at things. your just not quite the same as others, i mean you challenge the ways of society, you laugh at the haters, rejocye in the mistakes,love in the flaws, and fight all the pain.i love how you handle things. your never scared, and if you are you hide it well. i love you for who you are.
FAKE.
your just the same as all the others,you fall in line, and the haters make you cry. you hate your mistakes,and fix the flaws, and fall into the pain. you lose control so easy, your always afraid. i hate who you are. ive known you for 15 years and still counting each day. you lie to everyone, even yourself. you MIGHT be pretty on the outside but inside its not the same. i know what you think, i know what you dream. you cringe in the darkness instead of finding the light, but you do put on a good show i have to say.had me going for awhile. i actually thought i was pretty,i was brave, i was not afraid, i was diffrent, and i was loved. you put these lies into my heart and drained it dry. now all thats left is the rest to die.
sincerly,
a note from self

Author's Note

as well as all the other poems i have writtin, please excuse my mistakes.

Reviews

[Patricia(:]

This was .. wow! A very good wow I must say. I actually love the twist at the end, 'Sincerly,a not from self.' I didn't expect that. Well as they say, expect the unexpected. Your falling yourself fake, and pointing our your flaws. Also another nice touch to put such emotion into this poem. Truth be told this people reminds me a bit of myself, which also help me connect to this amazing piece of yours(: Mistakes are mistakes, whatever 'mistakes' may have been in this didn't take away from the true emotion this poem holds.