![]() Chapter 1- Sweet FreedomA Chapter by Alex ScoutenDecember 3, 2027 It was a surprisingly warm
winter day. A nice breeze, the hot sun, the clouds in the sky looked thin and
wispy. Today was the perfect day to lie around and do nothing. As these
thoughts passed through Niana’s mind, he knew that even if it was perfect that
his mentor would force him to train. Niana didn’t see why he had to though, he
was already tall and built, and was smart as well. Niana had dark brown medium
length hair, glassy blue eyes, and had quite a bit of muscle on him. He was
also tall for a seventeen year old, had nice tan skin, and was pretty
attractive. Of course he knew this, so he usually went shirtless and only wore
shorts in case a girl came by and caught a glimpse of him in the midst of training.
He snapped out of his daze as soon as he heard, “Niana Rasti Poroto! Get your
a*s in here and start training!” Niana
didn’t know why she insisted on using his full name when she was getting his
attention. Jesse Poroto, Niana’s mentor and foster mother, was strict when it
came to his training. She was a woman in her forties, had long black hair, and
was taller than Niana but not by much. Usually she wore long robes, had solid
white eyes, and always had a tired expression. Niana loves Jesse and he showed
it as best as a seventeen year old could, but she still got on his nerves at
times. “Master, do we have to train today?” Niana said in a whiney tone. “Yes!
If you want to become stronger then you have to work hard.” Niana wouldn’t
admit it, but he didn’t really care about training all hours of the day. He’d
much rather be flirting with girls or be with his friends. Not that he would
say that to Jesse’s face but he kept that thought in mind. Jesse started to
talk as if she could read his mind. “You
know what? You’ve been working very hard lately and I know that you have tried
your best, so I’ll give you today off.” Niana cheered but Jesse started again
in a stern tone. “But the second you slip up in training then I won’t let up
and you’ll train from the time you wake up, till the time you pass out on the
lawn.” “Thank you master, I will work hard as ever tomorrow when I start
training” Niana yelled, trailing off as he went ran his separate way. The only
thing Jesse could think about is the fact that he might get into more trouble
than he could imagine, because little did he know, he harnessed a great power
that only she knew of. Niana
thought to himself as he was running down the hill to the city that he knew
exactly where he was going, to see his best friend Steven Laogo. He couldn’t
even remember the last time he talked to him in person, sure their was a
hologram video chat every once in a while but that was about it. As Niana drew
closer to Steven’s house he saw something that made him shudder and his nerves
go crazy. There she was, the most beautiful girl in all of Timonia, Amilia
Stolonis. One look at her could make any guy fall to pieces, even the guys who thought
they had it all figures out melted at the sound of her voice. She was like an
angel, but an angel who did something and was punished by being placed in this
hellhole known as the town of As
soon as I got to Steven’s house I banged on the door as if I was in a panic, he
answered the door with a worried look asking, “Are you all right?!” I knew I
was but yelled a witty response to give him a scare. “No! I’m not! I think that
my house is on fire! I need your help!” He started out the door while grabbing
me and dragging me along but I laughed as I finished my sentence. “By the way,
I’m pulling your leg and just came over to see you and tell you about what I
saw!” At first he didn’t respond but then he came to a halt and looked at me.
“That was the stupidest joke in the whole world, it really was.” He looked away from me for a while, after a
short silence he just turned around and we both went into his house. I
felt like a girl gossiping to her girlfriend when I talked about seeing Amilia,
but I didn’t care because I wanted somebody other than me to know. His
expression didn’t show a hint of him caring but I knew on the inside he was
wondering how I didn’t just run back to my house in fear of her beauty. “She is
the most beautiful thing ever and I’m going to marry her some day.” I said
jokingly. “Yeah right, you and what personality?” I knew now he was making fun
of me but I just accepted it and went on. After a while of talking and catching
up I knew it was getting dark out. So as I walked out the door I said, “I don’t
want to worry Jesse so I’m going to head home.” He only responded with a shake
of his head but I knew he understood. © 2011 Alex Scouten |
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Added on December 8, 2011 Last Updated on December 8, 2011 Author![]() Alex ScoutenMooresville, NCAboutI just started writing. I have written many songs and poems but as for stories, I just started more..Writing
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